I went back to see what could be done with the two series I shot of Charlotte and found a couple of images that actually look quite nice. I will be much more careful next time to check the position of hands etc.
For the first one, leaning against the fence, I thought a more dramatic water color effect would work well. The fence then becomes an interesting feature rather than a fairly crappy background.
The second shot comes from the series I shot when I realized how nice the light was in the barn, where it feathered out to really soft light as you moved inward. This pose in comfortable, and I emphasize her soft skin and bright eyes and lips here.